After much debating in my head which kept me WIDE awake until 5 am... um, yesterday CRAP! I have finally, I think, I hope, I - dare I say it? pray that I have figured it out.
What was once 81 pages is now 60 pages. Sweet. What did I cut? Things I didn't like. Things I didn't like were necessary or did not plan to resolve in Act 2 and a HUGE chunk of the last scene that, while it was good, felt forced and off somehow. FUNNY - but not quite right.
So maybe I am moving on. Act 2 is calling me. I have a little bit of it written, but it is giving me the same grief that Act 1 did at the beginning.
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